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Subject: Hows this, "In Da Backseat" to "Under the Sea"
Written By: Jack Wilson on 10/25/06 at 8:28 pm
LOL none of its true..if youre not a dad taking your family on vacation with little kids for a logn drive.
SUV is all packed up and we
Subject: Re: Hows this, "In Da Backseat" to "Under the Sea"
Written By: Claude_Prez on 10/26/06 at 5:48 am
Hi Jack! I like the idea a lot, and you have some very good stuff in there. My problem, though, is there are a lot of places where I'm expecting a rhyme and I don't get one. For example, in the first verse, "vacation" doesn't really rhyme with "away", and "floor" doesn't rhyme with "too".
I love your enthusiasm for parodies -- not just your own, but other peoples', too -- and I think you have some really good ideas. I would love to see you go through this one carefully and change some of the non-rhyming lines that contained rhymes in the original to rhyming ones and see how it comes out.
I hope you're not offended or discouraged by this; if you keep at it, you'll write some great stuff. Good luck!
Subject: Re: Hows this, "In Da Backseat" to "Under the Sea"
Written By: Jack Wilson on 10/26/06 at 6:42 am
Hi Jack! I like the idea a lot, and you have some very good stuff in there. My problem, though, is there are a lot of places where I'm expecting a rhyme and I don't get one. For example, in the first verse, "vacation" doesn't really rhyme with "away", and "floor" doesn't rhyme with "too".
I love your enthusiasm for parodies -- not just your own, but other peoples', too -- and I think you have some really good ideas. I would love to see you go through this one carefully and change some of the non-rhyming lines that contained rhymes in the original to rhyming ones and see how it comes out.
I hope you're not offended or discouraged by this; if you keep at it, you'll write some great stuff. Good luck!
Thanks a lot C4P!!! You have a lot of awesome stuff too,I checked almost everything out a couple weekends ago ,Spaff #2.
Oh yeah,I knew those rhymes would be a problemm Il fix them!
BTW are we ever gonna see a new parody form the Prez Dispenser this year?
Subject: Re: Hows this, "In Da Backseat" to "Under the Sea"
Written By: agrimorfee on 10/26/06 at 8:32 am
I echo Claude...the rhymes are the end-all be-all of "Under The Sea", no matter the subject matter.
Subject: Re: Hows this, "In Da Backseat" to "Under the Sea"
Written By: Claude_Prez on 10/26/06 at 11:12 am
Thanks a lot C4P!!! You have a lot of awesome stuff too,I checked almost everything out a couple weekends ago ,Spaff #2.
I did notice that; thanks and sorry I'm so bad about replying. I do appreciate it.
BTW are we ever gonna see a new parody form the Prez Dispenser this year?
That's hilarious, I like it a lot. I do think I'll be getting back to it before long. I have some ideas churning. Good luck with yours; I'll look for it.
Subject: Re: Hows this, "In Da Backseat" to "Under the Sea"
Written By: Jack Wilson on 10/26/06 at 5:55 pm
I did notice that; thanks and sorry I'm so bad about replying. I do appreciate it.
That's hilarious, I like it a lot. I do think I'll be getting back to it before long. I have some ideas churning. Good luck with yours; I'll look for it.
Awesome, and thats alright!
LOL awesome! Ok thtd be awesome! and thanks!